Lou's World of Fiction

The accumulated fiction published on LouCeeL

100 Word Challenge – Precise

Posted by misterlou on May 26, 2009

You know, you’re a real jerk. (ambiguous)
Why, what did I do now? (attempt at clarification)
I shouldn’t have to tell you. (still ambiguous)
Did I forget something? (a further attempt at clarification)
When do you ever remember anything? I ALWAYS have to remind you. (perhaps a bit less ambiguous)
What? Is today something? (digging a little deeper)
Why do I have to tell you? You are such a JERK! (still stuck in ambiguity)
Open the drawer by the bed. (heading toward precision)
What’s this? Oh, my God. (getting closer)
Like it? (eliciting precision)
I love you, you jerk. (precise)

The above is this week’s response to VelvetVerbosity’s 100 Word Challenge.

First publish on 2/21/08 as http://louceel.blogspot.com/2008/02/100-word-challenge-3-precise.html

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One Response to “100 Word Challenge – Precise”

  1. shadow said

    mmmmm, what did you forget????

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